This week we started working on poetry moving image. The poem is called "Don't quit" by unknown user. I really enjoyed this poem, and I think it is very inspirational.
The poem was very good, and it has a good meaning to it. You need to make sure that you put a verse on each slide, other wise it doesn't make sense to the reader. It would have been a lot better if you had slowed down the slides so the reader had a good amount of time to read the writing and take it in. The pictures you used were good and related to the topic in some way. The music you used was good, but I think you could have used something a bit grander, as that was sort of dainty. You need to watch were you put your commas, as a few sentences didn't make sense. On the first slide it was a bit difficult to read, as the writing didn't stand out from the picture. You can see you have put effort into finding the right pictures for the right lines. Well Done
That is a great video! I like the music because it fits the theme of the poem very well. You also chose good pictures that fit with the poem as well. For the end, you should have changed the slides a bit so it had bore than two lines per slide. That would have made it look slightly better. Overall, I think it was very good!
I agree with Amelia your slides go a tiny bit too fast. you can't read all the words because the background was too dark. Other wise your ballad was good.
Your ballad was really good. You used great pictures that relate to the text. Your music was good but you could have used something a bit more motivational. Overall your video was really interesting and fun to watch.
I agree with Arden you worked hard on your photos music and how it related to the poem. I hope you can do thing this cool this year. Keep up the great work. :-]
The poem was very good, and it has a good meaning to it. You need to make sure that you put a verse on each slide, other wise it doesn't make sense to the reader. It would have been a lot better if you had slowed down the slides so the reader had a good amount of time to read the writing and take it in. The pictures you used were good and related to the topic in some way. The music you used was good, but I think you could have used something a bit grander, as that was sort of dainty. You need to watch were you put your commas, as a few sentences didn't make sense. On the first slide it was a bit difficult to read, as the writing didn't stand out from the picture. You can see you have put effort into finding the right pictures for the right lines. Well Done
ReplyDeleteThat is a great video! I like the music because it fits the theme of the poem very well. You also chose good pictures that fit with the poem as well. For the end, you should have changed the slides a bit so it had bore than two lines per slide. That would have made it look slightly better. Overall, I think it was very good!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Amelia your slides go a tiny bit too fast. you can't read all the words because the background was too dark. Other wise your ballad was good.
ReplyDeleteYour ballad was really good. You used great pictures that relate to the text. Your music was good but you could have used something a bit more motivational. Overall your video was really interesting and fun to watch.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Arden you worked hard on your photos music and how it related to the poem. I hope you can do thing this cool this year. Keep up the great work. :-]
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